{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"41542019","dateCreated":"1313920218","smartDate":"Aug 21, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"HazzaSteen","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/HazzaSteen","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1298018055\/HazzaSteen-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/gats-macbeth.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/41542019"},"dateDigested":1532254481,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sorry miss. I actually couldn't read it.","description":"!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"41452767","dateCreated":"1313578914","smartDate":"Aug 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"KAV_IN_WIKI","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KAV_IN_WIKI","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1298198136\/KAV_IN_WIKI-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/gats-macbeth.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/41452767"},"dateDigested":1532254481,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"post here!","description":"I thought this essay was good but in the first and second or so paragraphs he wrote basically a recount of the events that occured before the dagger scene which we already know. This took alot of his space and time which he could of used to write about the dagger scene itself rather than irrelevant information. <br \/>\nIf you havnt read the essay yet you should try, it isnt actually as unreadable as it looks. I know i could talk because i have the most unreadable handwriting in the class but that doesnt matter.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"41477379","body":"I thought the response was very good, but could've been far more effective. In the begining they talked about every single significant event from the start of the play leading up to the dagger scene. If this was eliminated it would have saved the author a lot of time and space. When the actual analysis of the dagger scene began, it was very clear and easy to comprehend. So overall, it was a very good response.","dateCreated":"1313655140","smartDate":"Aug 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"declan.monro","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/declan.monro","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41478007","body":"I thought it was a good summary of the beginning of the play. But since that wasn't the task then the writer wasted to much time when they could have been explaining the dagger scene. the actual analysation of the play was good though :)","dateCreated":"1313657870","smartDate":"Aug 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"hobbs143","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hobbs143","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1338861379\/hobbs143-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41478177","body":"Dagger scene example 2:<br \/>\nThe considerably illegible second example that analyses the dagger scene displays a higher level of intricacy in its language. This analysis was better in various departments despite its tendency to drift off topic. Although the explanation of why Macbeth is killing Duncan is a good approach, the detail was better intended for the scene itself rather than the before and after. Though this example did not make the mistake so much as the first example, the tense was still changed throughout the text.","dateCreated":"1313658781","smartDate":"Aug 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"matt.arsenal","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/matt.arsenal","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41495719","body":"I think that this response is a good summary however i felt that much was wasted in expalining what had happened before and more time should have been spent on analysising the scene. It was good overall however the writing made it difficult to understand. I believe this example is more well written compared to the first example.","dateCreated":"1313712672","smartDate":"Aug 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"em...ily","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/em...ily","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41504829","body":"This response was good, except they went into too much detail about the summary of events in this scene. There was also a lot of unnecessary information and I found the handwriting was very hard to read.","dateCreated":"1313735503","smartDate":"Aug 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"dean1996","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dean1996","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41507231","body":" I agree with kavin that there were too much irrelevant information at the start which took a lot of room. This writer didnt write enough of the scene itself. It was a good response but I found the first example better as it got to the point and didnt talk about all the irrelevant information. And the handwriting was soooo hard to read.took me forever","dateCreated":"1313751172","smartDate":"Aug 19, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"John.Ma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/John.Ma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1297937599\/John.Ma-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41539853","body":"This example talks quite a bit about what events are going on in the play surrounding the scene, this makes it clearer what the person is implying in terms of the meaning of the scene and particular quotes, although maybe the summary didn't need to be quite so detailed. The second paragraph talks well about language techniques. I think maybe it was unnecessary to talk about what happened after the scene or at least in the detail that they did. The last paragraph talking about how it shows Macbeths character is a good way to finish.","dateCreated":"1313904700","smartDate":"Aug 20, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"sophster1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sophster1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41542091","body":"Comared to the first essay, this was much better. They had their information and writing techniques and everything was in order. However, they did waste some space and time with unnecessary information. They did a good job explaining the techniques and what the passage meant. I won't complain about the handwriting, considering mine.","dateCreated":"1313921193","smartDate":"Aug 21, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Kea102","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Kea102","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1298511557\/Kea102-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41554301","body":"This response was quite impressive, yet there were still some negative points. Firstly, it was hard to read despite the well-practised handwriting. Secondly, there was much unnecessary information as she explained the events in detail leading up to the scene.","dateCreated":"1313974787","smartDate":"Aug 21, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jamez1997","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jamez1997","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41554305","body":"This essay was writen better than the other one. Everything was in order and they answered the question better. The person had good examples although their handwriting was a bit difficult to read.","dateCreated":"1313974799","smartDate":"Aug 21, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"REBECCA_WITCOMBE","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/REBECCA_WITCOMBE","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1338861647\/REBECCA_WITCOMBE-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41556661","body":"This essay was neatly written, but unfortunately because of their small writing and the low-quality scan, it was near-illegible. From what I could read, it made some good points (most being better than the first essay), but it had lots of unnecessary information.","dateCreated":"1313979813","smartDate":"Aug 21, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"BodenM","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/BodenM","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1300671237\/BodenM-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41579851","body":"a little late.. but i actually thought that this essay was written very well. I had trouble reading it so for people with messy writing -coughjamescough- i feel sorry for miss. What mystery person write in his\/her essay was backed up by a lot of explanation of techniques, etc. He\/she clearly analysed the dagger scene and even though it was hard to read, it was worth it.","dateCreated":"1314054571","smartDate":"Aug 22, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Christeenaloo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Christeenaloo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":2}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}